but what I’m trying to get is the dynamics of the larger culture. the kind of language – cert, Corp, database, unincorporated – that is common usage among the Imperians. <sigh> but I’m so not happy with the attempt below, or the other attempt yesterday or the day before. it’s just not sparking me. I feel like I need something to kick me in the ass. maybe I should just read the draft again – I was feeling pretty psyched while I was reading it.
bleh, bleh, and double-bleh.
at least I’m writing lots of haiku, right? this evening’s contribution:
on a bank sign
the sun setting too soon
I’m not sure if I’m getting better at these or not….